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Takeoff, pages 1-5

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"Takeoff", pages 1-5.

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After months of work, here it is! The first of some comics I’m putting together for my senior graphic novel project. This one’s a deceptively simple story about a fox and his bird pilot.

I’ve always loved drawing comics, but never before have I attempted one with this much care and planning. Please enjoy. <3

Ink and nib pen, watercolor.
Story and art © me.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

The poses for these characters are amazing, in the third to last panel, I love how the wing bends, it looks natural and yet like a human at the same time. I also love the character designs, you've managed to put a jacket on a bird, and if that isn't amazing, I don't know what is. The fox is absolutely adorable, I really want to pet the little guy <3 His scarf looks like it could flow beautifully. The storyline, It's pretty original, but I can see the theme of "Former Partner In Crime" being used anywhere. Wonderful story though. The impact of this piece was okay, I really liked how it ended in a sort of cliffhanger type thing. I absolutely love this, and I look forward for more.

Really like the cute fox. <3